2010, ജൂൺ 14, തിങ്കളാഴ്‌ച

for all the lovely relations ,
that are apart...
awake arise from the slumber,
stop missing it,by messing up....!!
for that silly misunderstanding,
that lead to this loss of understanding..
once, d one who were more than your soul,
is turning out to be nothing more than a sole..
those fingers that entangled yours,
are now wiping out the dripping sea..
when a single look can turn it alright,
y make it weird ,frawning???
all the forts that were built together,
are crumbling down beneith your knees.
a single touch, a soothing word ,
can build it all upright..!!
fedup of these stupidities,...
let me makeup mine...!!!!!

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try to write in malayalam...

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